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One of the charms but also a great
frustration of reading Carman is reading Carman. The prose is not for the
weak of heart. I give you this one sentence as an example that is found
in Chapter 5 (The Middle Bridge). It describes the advance of Captain John S.
Poland's (USMA May 1861) Second and
Tenth U.S. Infantry troops up the Boonsboro Pike toward the town of
Sharpsburg. This is part of the Fifth Corps advance that so many don't
seem to acknowledge ever happened. Consult the map below to see the Second and Tenth Infantry position at 4:20 PM. Here in Carman's words is his
description of Captain Poland's movement:
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| Carman-Copes 4:20 PM Map Fifth Corps area |
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he [Poland] deployed on his right, in skirmishing order and the entire line, quite a
long one, went forward, ascended the slope of a hill and under a heavy fire of
canister from Squires' and Moody's guns in front, and some guns beyond the road
on the right, and from Garnett's skirmishers pushed over the high ground,
passed the haystacks, where some of Twigg's men and others of the 17th South
Carolina were captured drove back McMaster, who at the same time was attacked
on the right by the advance of Burnside and, reaching Sherrick's lane halted
under the cover of the fence and became closely and sharply engaged.[1]
I count 109 words...in one sentence. Some people may never be able to get past this in terms of trying to read Carman. However I enjoy reading it; but I have to go slow, re-read, and I often find myself chopping up the excruciatingly long sentences like this one, into more easily understandable ones. Despite my grousing here, I don’t think I would want it any other way. It forces me to read deeply and repetitively. I am facing this sometimes obstacle course of words - and learning. When I need clarity and context, the hundreds of phenomenal footnotes offered by editor Tom Clemens provide it.
If you are ready to read the next sentence and find out what happened to Captain Poland's advance toward Sharpsburg, read The Maryland Campaign by Ezra Carman, edited and annotated by Tom Clemens.
I count 109 words...in one sentence. Some people may never be able to get past this in terms of trying to read Carman. However I enjoy reading it; but I have to go slow, re-read, and I often find myself chopping up the excruciatingly long sentences like this one, into more easily understandable ones. Despite my grousing here, I don’t think I would want it any other way. It forces me to read deeply and repetitively. I am facing this sometimes obstacle course of words - and learning. When I need clarity and context, the hundreds of phenomenal footnotes offered by editor Tom Clemens provide it.
If you are ready to read the next sentence and find out what happened to Captain Poland's advance toward Sharpsburg, read The Maryland Campaign by Ezra Carman, edited and annotated by Tom Clemens.
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